not too bad, but...
I really did like this alot, really mellow and cool, but it sounded like it was building and building and building, all up to nothing. when it starts to hit the point where you did your lil solo, you should step it up just a lil bit. not really fade off into a single sounds resonating over and over. but give it a little kick with some energy, then level off into your solo, that would be hot. but thats just my opinion, i only have four songs so far, and not even on here. ( too nervous of a bad review) but my friends like em.
Thanks for the listen, ill take this into consideration. Keep an eye on my list and im sure you will be pleasantly surprised when i upload a more complete version.
As newgrounds does not allow me to edit songs once they are uploaded im unable to keep up to date versions of my song posted here. So i started an mp3.com account for this reason, the latest version of my song(but still not complete) can be found there.
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